Posted May 5, 200718 yr There was a hazy sky, a few stars Which I followed as best I could. It was nine o’clock, I was trying to get home. But somehow I was lost, Though really keeping the road. Then I reeled through a gate and into a yard, And called at the top of my voice: “Oh, Fiddler! Oh, Mr. Jones!” (I thought it was his house and he would show me the way home.) But who should step out but A. D. Blood, In his night shirt, waving a stick of wood, And roaring about the cursed saloons, And the criminals they made? “You drunken Oscar Hummel,” he said, As I stood there weaving to and fro, Taking the blows from the stick in his hand Till I dropped down dead at his feet. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@ HAVE you seen walking through the village A man with downcast eyes and haggard face? That is my husband who, by secret cruelty Never to be told, robbed me of my youth and my beauty; Till at last, wrinkled and with yellow teeth, And with broken pride and shameful humility, I sank into the grave. But what think you gnaws at my husband’s heart? The face of what I was, the face of what he made me! These are driving him to the place where I lie. In death, therefore, I am avenged. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ “Oscar Hummel”, “Ollie McGee” from Spoon River Anthology, Edgar Lee Masters, (New York: Macmillan, 1916)
May 5, 200718 yr Farmersville, eh? Actually, it looks like a smaller West Milton (I know, West Milton isn't exactly "large" but if you go there, you'll see what I mean). "You don't just walk into a bar and mix it up by calling a girl fat" - buildingcincinnati speaking about new forumers
May 5, 200718 yr Neat thread; the b&w images really carry the theme of the poems. Reading them, I was reminded of a former neighbor of ours who died in her 70s after a life made miserable by a mean drunk of a husband. The sentiment expressed by many who knew her was that at least the old bastard could have died first, and given her a few years of peace. I don't think anyone lamented his passing when at last he went to the grave -- not even his children.
May 6, 200718 yr Actually, it looks like a smaller West Milton (I know, West Milton isn't exactly "large" but if you go there, you'll see what I mean). I think of Farmersville as a budget version of Germantown. This is sort of an artsy look, using the place as a stand-in for something else, but its worth a "straight" pix set someday. Ive always had a feel for those country towns in western Montg. County. neat thread; the b&w images really carry the theme of the poems... Yeah, I was trying to work on feel here. The poem selection from Spoon River is not by me but from album by a country-folk-rock musician setting selected poems to music, so i was working with the feell of the music as much as the words (but he did pick some of the stronger ones). Incidentally, googling the subject, I found out that someone already did this...an Italian and an American did a book of photos and poems called Ciao Spoon River, of the countryside and towns Masters was from. I was reminded of a former neighbor of ours who died in her 70s after a life made miserable by a mean drunk of a husband. The sentiment expressed by many who knew her was that at least the old bastard could have died first, and given her a few years of peace. I don't think anyone lamented his passing when at last he went to the grave -- not even his children. All sorts of storys like this in small towns. I'm not sure how well known Spoon River Antholgy is outside of lit circles. I never studied it in school and came across it by accident (so it was quite a shock finding out a pop muscian based an album on it). The better poems are a good example of what looks simple (free verse) really isn't. I just like the stark, flat tone/plain speech of the poems.
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